We are the Knights (that’s pronounced phonetically - cuh-nig-its - as of the movie Monty Python and the Holy Grail) Who Say Cyclic, a group of High School students, all of whom attended 6thgrade at Challenger School. At Challenger, we each gained not only a respect of the English language but also the want to change the world. Our noble mission is to improve America, one step at a time – primarily by improving the U.S.’s tongue and correcting false ideas about how its government functions. To learn more, please visit our website at www.cuhnigits.org.
Sunday, June 17, 2012
Random Poem-Stuff
Hey! So, no one's really posted any writing for a while, and I've kind of been missing the feedback. Anyone interested in starting that up again? I have a couple poems I just wrote; I'd love to hear your thoughts on them!
Here is one:
Here is one:
Rainstorm
marbles-
whirling, crashing
onto the metal
sheet
of streets
and circuses.
and
mind won taxies
slosh
through cloud-and-window puddles
and the tremblefog tilts,
considering the whirling dancers
that wrap olive
trees in
silver wire.
above these charging brooders,
cirrus clouds
jostle
impatiently,
the smell of
asphalt-heated rain
waking their stomachs,
salivating and
stretching for
the
warming wet
of morning.
Also, how is everybody? =)
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Wow, that was an INCREDIBLE poem, Laga!!! It was beautiful. Great imagery. I especially loved the dancers that wrapped silver wire around the olive trees. Gorgeous. I want to read more :)
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